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Review:Debra20 says:
Hey there marina! This is a story I've been meaning to read for some time now, but never really got to doing it before. So here I am :)

I am always craving for any Alice and Frank stories but this one is just wow! It's one of the best I have read. I guess I'll start off by saying how excited I am because of the characterization of the couple. We don't have many details to go by in the books and yet you managed to pull off a very believable and real and deep personality for both of them in only these few words. My heart aches for both of them. I loved the part when Frank, despite his terrible pain, pulls himself across the floor just so that he can reach Alice and be with her. To see if she's still there.

It was a very sad (but well handled!) moment when Frank realizes that she's forgotten who she was...who he was. What's worse than death is memory loss. It's harder on the family and the people you leave behind because you can neither mourn your loss nor actually be with them, you know? It must be a very hard burden to bear. That's one of the many reasons why I honestly respect Neville.

Another aspect of the story that I appreciated is how Frank was the last of the two to lose consciousness and that's only because he understood that she was lost forever. I simply can't imagine how much agony that can produce in someone. He was already affected by the Death Eaters spell but seeing his wife like that, and realizing that, himself is hopeless and can't help her, was what really broke him.

A truly sad yet wonderful piece!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I find their story so desperately tragic, but it's amazing how Neville rises from the ashes so well and I also respect him so much for it. Thank you for reviewing!

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