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Review:ohmymerlin says:
NOOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO-OOO!

I KEPT PUTTING OFF READING THIS BECAUSE I KNEW THIS WOULD BE A SAD CHAPTER!

/sobs forever and ever.

THE WAY SHE SAID, "Please you can't leave me, I need you, I love you..." I WAS SHAKING BECAUSE NOOO HE DIED AND FABIAN DIED AND NOOO!

I had this open for ages but every time I'd see 'Frozen' a the top I'd go to the next tab, trying to procrastinate!

MY SUBCONSCIOUS KNEW WHAT WAS HAPPENING AND WHY DO I STILL FEEL SO HORRIBLE?!?!?!!?

I'm so upset that he died! I can't believe that he's gone!

But the best thing about his death (NOT THAT IT WAS A GOOD THING) is that you didn't make it so emotionally traumatising that it made me feel like I never want to leave the house again, you made it okay to deal with and not end up in a sobbing heap.

Maybe because I was expecting it, I didn't feel as bad as I usually do when a character dies.

But it was still sad! :'( :'(

I know you had to make him die, but it was still so upsetting!

And there's only two chapters left so now I'm even more sad! :(

Ah well, it's an EXTREMELY good story, please, PLEASE update soon! :D

54154257241852874163741852745295274/10! ;D

Author's Response: He died. I'm sorry. :( This chapter was so sad to write! I really didn't want to kill him off, but I had to stick with canon ... clearly I should never choose to write about doomed characters again, it's far too heart-wrenching a writing process. And I'm glad that you liked how it was done, because I definitely didn't want it to be completely emotionally crippling. I'm hoping to get this finished by this time next week, so updates should be quick! Thanks for reviewing :)

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