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Review:caoty says:
Hey there, I'm from tag.

You've got a lovely dreamy way of writing, with the ribbons and so on. It's gorgeous. I could've read that all day. And you've managed to blend it well with the harsh, profane dialogue too, which in itself sounds natural and realistic.
Speaking of which, this line:
>They must think weve got some wicked good spliff.
is the best description of a wand ever. XD

These four seem a lot like our Marauders, and I'd be interested to see how the two groups interact.

There were a few typos - maybe get a beta, or proofread or something - but apart from that, I can't really find fault with this, and you might see me again reviewing just for the fun of it, so watch this space.

Author's Response: Oh this is a bit lovely, and by a bit I mean a bunch; thank you. I'm so glad you think the two contrasts managed alongside one another. I always worry one or the other will put people off; my writing is too airy for some, and the language too crass for others. Which makes me even happier you enjoyed it, combined and all! Aha.

Evie makes it pretty easy for me, she's as loud in my head when I'm writing her as my own voice is sometimes.

I shall have another read through and make some corrections, I tend to make adjustments and fixes over time rather than when I should-but I will! Thank you again for reviewing, sweet thing. I'd love to see you again, aha.

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