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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hi there! I'm here with your super-late review. I'm so sorry about it, I've just been really busy with real life.

I don't understand how you can find fluff hard to write. I found the whole story written so good and I absolutely enjoyed every word of it.

I loved how you set-up this kind of awkward atmosphere around the characters from the very beginning. Then, a very..erm...confident Teddy suddenly popped out of nowhere, setting an entirely different feeling.

You really did catch me off guard with that scene, and even more so when Teddy asked whose flat they wanted to go to after dinner. Gosh, that just made me feel sow weird. (O.o) Thankfully, though it was all Molly's imagination.

And then the ending! Other people might say otherwise, but I thought the ending was perfect. I mean, what's fluff without a little bit of cliche, right?

I really loved this story, even though this is the first time I read Teddy/Molly. And I apologise if the review is a bit (or a lot) sloppy; I'm starting to get out of practise.

I'll be back soon (hopefully),
Izzy xx

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing this, Izzy! No worries about the lateness - it's just wonderful to receive feedback, especially when it's to hear that you've enjoyed the story, too. ^_^

It's not like anything I'd written up to that point, and probably not like anything since - I wanted to go for something lighthearted, slightly satirical, playing a trick on readers as I went. It's something I'd like to try again, where a character's dream takes over the "reality" of a story, but perhaps I'd let the readers in on it better, creating some good old dramatic irony. I'm glad that you liked the ending! I'm so used to writing bleak or strange twists that writing something more... normal felt incredibly foreign to me. One day, I'll get used to writing fluff. XD

Thank you again for this review! It's quite a good one for being out of practice - I really appreciate that you took the time to leave it, being busy as you are. It means a lot! ^_^

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