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Review:LoopyLemon says:
Ooooh I want to read!!

This was a fantastic prologue. A wonderful taster of the story to come. I know that we are reading from Astoria's point of view even though it is never stated. Being able to know these details without having to be explicitly told is amazing.

I loved the line about her being a traitor. I think it is very fitting that this is who Draco falls in love with.

Please keep writing this, it looks amazing! :D

Author's Response: Hello!

I am so glad you enjoyed this Chapter! I also love that it's evident that Astoria is telling the story without me explicitly writing it. I wasn't sure if that would come across as clearly as it did, which is great! And just.Thanks! This review puts a smile on my face everytime I read it!

~Grimmerz


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