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Review:Leigh Kelley says:
Hi there (:.

Your summary was intriguing, and so I decided to give your story a read. I think you have an excellent idea here. Not only that, but your writing is on par. It may not have been a long chapter, but I really feel that it did it's job with drawing in the reader. This reader, anyway.

I like the little glimpses we've seen of the characters so far. Rose seems a nice combination of her parents. Father's looks and excellence at chess, and Mum's brains. And I like how Al's not exactly like his father. Well, they do have the same ability for getting into sticky situations though, eheh.

It's a great start, and I can't wait to see what comes next. Keep writing (:.

Leigh

Author's Response: Hello! I'm so happy you liked the summary and the chapter. And I'm ecstatic to hear that you liked my view of the characters. :) I didn't want Al to be too much like his father, and I'm glad you liked that. Again, thank you so so much for the amazing review. :D

~Rosie


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