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Review:IceCubism says:
AHHH! AMAZING STORY!!!

Okay, sorry. I'll stop with the capital letters now.

But, honestly. Fantastic. Superb. One of the best I ever read.

Though I think you should thicken the plot a little more and add some twists to the story or it'll just turn out to be a cliched, bland love story where Mae and James just get together. Happily ever after. The end.

Well, of course, I think your story is still great. I'm just giving several suggestions. So, please, don't take offense.

I love this story but I'm dying to know more about Mae's background, so maybe you could go into it deeper and tell us more about her family etc.? You don't have to add this in the next chapter you write or anything - just a suggestion which you can put in in an appropriate chapter or something.

Anyway, I will definitely keep on reading this story, so update soon!

Author's Response: thank so much for your review!
I am so happy that you have said that it is a great story - a real moral booster.
don't worry! the plot has a lot more twists and turns coming up! i'm writing a part now with a major twist!
a lot more of mae's background is being introduced into the story as well, parts on her parents, her life outside school and of course, the famous mitchell, her brother!
the next chapter is now in validation!
keep reading!
x


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