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Review:countrymusicfanatic says:
This was pretty good but there was a perspective change. The beginning was all first person and then the last two paragraph's switched to third person. I don't know if anyone else has pointed this out but it should be a relatively easy fix since it was only a few paragraph's.

The only other thing I would recommend is maybe letting the information be more spread out. Rather than stating everything about the characters all at once, explain how they look and act throughout the novel so there's no information overload.

But I do really like the idea for this story and I'm excited to read the next two chapters!

Author's Response: Okay thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it and hope you keep reading :)

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