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Review:DumbledoresArmyOfOne says:
I really like this first chapter!
Just a few weird things: the formatting is super spaced out, which could get annoying to read.
Also, I'm a bit confused abut the use of the word 'punctual'. That means 'on time' but it doesn't seem to fit in context when you use it.
Also, 'adjourning the walls', i assume that's meant to be adorning?
Great premise, great writing, but it could use some editing :D

Author's Response: Yeah, I noticed the spacing thing was an issue with a lot of my chapters. I don't intentionally do that, the formatting gets messed up when I bring it over from word and I'm too lazy to edit it at the time. Its very time consuming to do. Meh I probably did mess up a few words in there. I'm not grammar princess. I really suck at it, to be honest. I might have to consider a beta pretty soon ;).

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