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Review:caoty says:
Hey there, I'm from tag, and currently upset that I missed the House Cup. XD

First off, your characterisation of Neville, Ginny and Luna are all spot on. Neville particularly stood out to me as being on the line between awkward and awesome, which is great, since a depressing number of authors choose to characterise him as having been tough and confident from the beginning and that simply isn't true.

You've also used your prompts very well - they all fit naturally into this fic and didn't feel as if you'd put them there as an afterthought, so well done.

There are a couple of technical mistakes - missed punctuation, Americanisms, that kind of thing - but apart from that, I can't think of any improvements.

I hope you write more in the future! ^.^

Author's Response: Ahh you made me a really happy teddy bear tonight. I'm thankful for taking from your time to read and leave a review. It really means a lot to me.

I'm very happy that you liked the characterizations of the 'new formed' trio. I'm always terribly worried about characterization so it's always a relief when people point out that I've handled it well.

I haven't really read many Neville centered fics but I always imagined Neville to be a late bloomer. We saw this throughout the series and at the end of the day this is Snape we are talking about. I imagined he wasn't nearly as terrified of Voldemort as he was of Snape. That's why I pictured him as being doubtful about breaking into his office.

I'll give it a re-read one of these days and correct some mistakes that have been previously pointed out to me. Thanks again for reviewing!

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