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Review:Cavell says:
BAH. I give up with you and your insane cliffies. (EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER. WHY, VAL, WHY? WHAT POSSESSES YOU TO TORTURE US EVERY SINGLE TIME YOU UPDATE?!?!?) I'm just going to refuse commenting on it any time I ever review. (We'll see how that works out, huh?) The worst thing about me being superbly late with this review is because I had it all typed up and everything and I read it out of curiousity when I reviewed last time. (Whoops?)

"Cat isn't a woman. She's a Quidditch player." - lolololol. Best quote ever! I loved it, and the glimpse into Cat's view on things. More often than not people say different views can often mess up the story system or something bizarre like that, but this was a nice change to the usual that I honestly, truly liked.

Flow was good! And Maya was absolutely lovely, I wish I had an older sister just like her (and considering I actually have a little sister...) and I loved the name Liam and the fact that she was a Ravenclaw and I have a feeling she's going to be quite an important part of the story. Le sigh. The Quidditch scene was absolutely hilarious, every time I reread it I grin like mad :p

Cat is so witty! I don't know, Kiwi's so damn lovable but I think I relate to Cat more because I think somehow she's more like me than Kiwi is, and if you're ever planning to go into Cat's view again (something like every third chapter, I'm thinking *wink wink nudge nudge*) I'd love you forever, seriously.

Well, that review was highly unhelpful. Oh well, nonetheless, go update with the sixth chapter soon! :D

Author's Response: Aww, Linn, you should know by now I only write those cliffhangers to annoy you! Just joking, the essential reason they're there is for /me/ to get back into the story and continue writing...

AHA, YOU ARE THE FIRST PERSON TO PICK UP ON THAT QUOTE! I have been waiting for this moment. It was so Oliver-esque, I just had to include it :)

I wish I had a sister like Maya too... Hopefully that's what I'm like with my sister? Or will be, sometime in the distant future.

She is going to be an important part of the story, in the sense that she's there to reign Cat in when she does stupid things. And Cat is going to continue doing stupid things, of course, so Maya will be there too.

I also relate more to Cat, so I can see why you want me to write more in her POV which is actually going to happen again! Soon.

It wasn't unhelpful at all. I love your reviews - almost as good as pancakes, remember?


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