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Review:bester_jester says:
You're a brilliant writer! I've seen your updates a lot and finally got around to reading, and I'm so glad that I did.

I really love the whole air of mystery to the story - Taylor's dad, the different family connections, the case with the Ministery and Fiendfyre. Makes it so much more substantial than a 'boy meets girl' story.

A few chapters back (last chapter?) when James went to Taylor's apartment and they talked about their crushes etc.. So cute and unexpected! I actually love their relationship and I can't wait for it to (hopefully) become more.

Speaking of relationships, I think you've done brilliantly with all of the friendships and connections throughout the whole thing. Everyone is so human and believable. Argh I love it!

And Taylor herself is just awesome. I'd keep going on, but I'm afraid I'll sound like a creepy stalker woman. Thanks so much for sharing this amazing story, I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your review seriously made my day!

I'm glad you like the mystery because I've been worried I'm leaving too many loose ends though they will all be tied up in the end (I hope!). I like the 'boy meets girl' stories but I get bored writing them so I'm glad it's been interesting and not annoying.

Yay! You liked the apartment scene! I was worried it would seem too forced but I liked it in the end so I'm glad other people did too. I wanted to show that they do have a history, going to a pretty small school and all, but that it's nothing with a load of baggage. I was trying to re-iterate the fact that they had two completely different experiences at the same time.

I always try to make my characters seem real, and I love creating the different friendship dynamics. I'm so relieved that you think it's working because I get really nervous about stuff like that.

Taylor has a lot of issues but I absolutely love writing her so I'm glad you enjoy it. Don't worry, I sound like a creepy stalker anytime I talk about Harry Potter so it's all good. Thanks so much for your review! I literally just finished the next chapter about an hour ago so I just need to proof-read and it should be up for viewing in the next week or so :)

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