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Review:RoseLolly says:
The first chapter of this was stunning, and I had to read on just to..see where it went. The way you write is lovely, and you have a way of describing things that I really like. The only fault I have really is perhaps more of a pet hate; the way you introduced her dorm mates, I find/found it clunky...if that makes sense. Melody's little bit was completely darling, and it was all well written...It just didn't feel like it belonged, or flowed-Lorcan's introduction was different, but just as effective. I don't know if I'm making sense, and I don't mean this badly-I adore what there is so far. ANYWAY, can't wait to read more =)

Author's Response: Hello, thank you so much, this is one of my less read stories so I'm glad someone likes it. Yeah, I didn't particularly like the way I introduced her dorm mates either but I just wanted to get it out of the way so I could finish the chapter and get it posted. I will probably go back and change it at some point, it doesn't really seem like Dominique's style. Oh Melody, she is a darling, bless her. Thanks for the comment though, I see where you were coming from and you are making perfect sense. Thank you for the review and more shall be coming soon... ish.

InkAndParchment x

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