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Review:ohmymerlin says:
*walks behind you sneakily and pokes you before legging it*
*passes out because I am ridiculously unfit*
*reads story*
*has explosion of emotions*
*starts review*
Okay, I'll start the review (finally!) ;)
When Charlie was saying how much he missed his family I was willing him to go home. I was so sad for him, he's going through so much! :'(
And then he said he was going to go home and I was so happy!
But I knew you were up to something fishy because... well... if he went home in chapter three, it would be quite a short story, wouldn't it? :p
Then he met Liz/Elizabeth and I was like oOo-OoO-oOo-OoOHHH!
(apologies for being strange).
She seems so cute and sweet! I just wanted to pinch her cheeks and say, "NAWH!"
When you said,
He failed to realize that it was the first time he'd laughed since Fred's death.
I nearly cried. It had been six months (or more? I'm not too sure) since he'd laughed?!?!?!!??!
Excuse me as I go sob in the corner.
I love the way they 'flirted'.
"I'm Charlie. Well, Charles, really, but..."
"But your friends call you Charlie?" she finished with a laugh.

It's official, I think I ship them! :p
Anyway, this chapter was sooo good and of course I favourited it! I was meant to when I reviews the first chapter but I must have forgotten!
Please update soon! :D
10/10! :D

Author's Response: Hey dear!

First off, I'm SO sorry for the RIDICULOUS amount of time it has taken me to respond to this! I've been really busy with school and work and... anyway, I'm sorry! And thank you SO, SO much for reading and reviewing!

Haha! I promise Charlie will go home... eventually. XD And that's very true, it would have been a short story indeed if he'd gone home this early! I don't think your comment was strange at all; it made me laugh! :D

I am SO, SO glad that you like Liz! I really want her to be like-able (without being a Mary-Sue), and thus far all the reactions I've received to her have been good ones; so I'm glad you liked her too! :D

Aww, I'm sorry! I didn't mean to almost make you cry! But yes, unfortunately, it HAD been quite a while since Charlie had laughed. I inserted that line to show a bit of contrast between his life before meeting Liz and his life after... if that makes any sense. And I didn't want it to seem like he's completely over Fred's death once he meets Liz, because he TOTALLY isn't, so I felt the need to relate back to Fred there as well. (I hope that explanation isn't too random to understand!) But please don't go sob in a corner!! :(

Yay for shipping them!! :D Thank you SO, SO much for this incredibly amazing and thoughtful review, and again for the favorite! I'll update as soon as possible!!! :D


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