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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there! I am finally here with your review!

First thing I want to say is... Ugh Rita Skeeter. Whenever I read, see or hear her name it's like running fingernails down a chalk board... you can't help but cringe.

Anyways...

I really enjoyed this chapter! I loved how the boys are now banded together and even that the boys from the other houses are starting to see that trend too. I am curious to know what is happening at Diagon Alley with the muggles and how they are entering it. I like how there is a bit of mystery here and it promises to be just as great as your other story!

You have done a brilliant job of keeping intrigue throughout this entire story and this chapter doesn't faulter from that. I am happy to see how much Albus, Louis, Nathan and Daniel have all changed in a short amount of time. Yes, it is marked with awful things that they have said and done, but this chapter really gives you that sense that the dynamic is changing between them for the better.

I also like how we get to see inside of moments where Greg is questioning himself and his sanity. He has a lot to deal with, but I think out of all of your characters, he has really been the one to only fit this position the way that it is needed.

Keep up the awesome writing! I look forward to finding out what else is going to happen! :)

-SR17

Author's Response: Evil woman, pure and simple. I'm amazed JKR didn't find a way for a falling bit of masonry to finish her off. I might need to correct that particular oversight.

I'd swap with Greg in an instant...


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