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Review:Veritaserum_Girl says:
Hey, it's Veritaserum Girl from the review thread.

I don't think you need to have too many concerns about grammar errors on this chapter, seeing as I couldn't find any :P

But, I will say that you have a very good start and I love your imagery. I also really like how the plot has started. I can't wait to read the next chapter.(:

Author's Response: Heya! Thanks for dropping by!

I'm glad you didn't find any grammar issues. I'm always kinda paranoid about them.

I think you'll have fun with the next chapter, honestly. I'm a very detail oriented person, so imagery is my thing...though sometimes I do way too much and it becomes wordy. I'm glad you liked it though!

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

--Rosie


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