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Review:SnitchSnatcher says:
Wow. I wish I knew a way to put my thoughts into comprehensible words at the moment, but alas I'm speechless.

The imagery in this was just - it was stunning, simply put. It wasn't overworked and excessive, but subtle and, in my humble opinion, perfectly executed. I loved the way you wove the threads of the original fairy tale into a believable and quite frankly lovely (in a very tragic way, mind) portrait of Eileen Prince's life both before and after she married Tobias. It was very vivid and sad, wonderfully done.

The characterization of Eileen and her development in the story was just marvelous. I wish I had more to say on the matter, but I doubt you want me to ramble on and on about how lovely and perfect and amazing the transition from dark princess to black queen was just magnificent.

I'm definitely adding this to my favorites.

Truly wonderful job.

Author's Response: Hello, and thank you for this lovely review! I'm so very sorry that this response took ages!

Thanks! I seem to struggle with laying a little thick on the imagery sometimes, which is certainly better than just forgetting it entirely (as I used to do) but still in need of work. I'm trying to practice weaving it in more effortlessly and making it part of the story, rather than a starring character. I'm also glad that the mood worked well and you felt like the fairy tale and canon made for a good mashup.

I'm glad you liked the transition for Eileen's character and the story overall. Thanks again for this wonderful review and the favorite :)

Amanda


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