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Review:Calypso says:
Hello- this is CalypsoJenna from the forums, here with your requested review!

Great start! It's a really original idea to have a character working at a radio station- and a lot more interesting than another Auror or Ministry worker. I liked the blend of magical and Muggle technology in Grace's studio.

Haven't seen too much of the characters yet, but so far they seem engaging enough:
I really liked the way you introduced Grace, plunging straight into the story with the radio broadcast and your description of Rose- the "good person, a brave person, a noble person and a smart person, but not a kind person"- was great, and really good device for telling the reader about the character.
It's difficult to glean much about Louis so far, but I see this is going to be a Louis/OC story so I'm sure we'll see much more of him in chapters to come!

I would say that this chapter is a little on the short side- it would be nice to have something a bit longer that one can get into more, but all in all I thought this was a great chapter. Grace seems like a great main character, and the idea of basing it around a radio station, I think is genius!

-Bethany

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I know it was a little short, and there was a good bit more meant to be in it originally. The thing is, in the end, it just seemed unnecessary and maybe even slightly confusing, so I finished it there. I thought the idea of the radio station was a little different, and I'm glad you liked it! Thank you again for the review, Charlie

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