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Review:The Last Marauder says:
AHH! What's with the Dark Mark? Who put it there and who died? Is Tonks Okay, and Andromeda? Again, with the cliffhangers! AHH! I really must know.

Anyway, my sense of suspense aside. This was a really nice chapter. I love how you are capturing the early stages of Tonks's pregnancy and how that makes Remus and Tonks feel themselves. It seemed very realistic to me, then again, I have no experience with such things, so I could be wrong.

I also like how you are showing (in a slow and gradual way) how Briony is becoming more sympathic or at least is softened by empathy, as time goes on living in the Lupin house. That is a nice development to see and you capture it very well.

I also liked how you captured Ron's return to the world/his departure from Harry and Hermione. I like how you do not have the characters press him for answers, but wait for him to come to them to explain on his own terms. That was great.

Anyway, sorry to the delay in reviewing, I've just been very busy! I seriously cannot wait for more (THE DARK MARK!!!), so please write more soon! Well done again on a really nice chapter.

-TLM

Author's Response: ah, thank you! and don't worry I will try to get the next chapter up as soon as possible! :D

and i'm glad you liked how i was trying to redeem briony's character. i wanted to give Remus that bit of hope in the last year of his life. and yes, i agree that they would wait to let Ron speak for himself.

and don't worry, i know how it is to be too busy to do the things you really want to. lol, but that aside, i'll still try to get the next chap up as soon as possible! :D

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