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Review:IceCubism says:
Oh my. This story, was obviously titled Sunshine for an apparent reason. It's all sunshine, rainbows, unicorns and happiness isn't it?

And aren't James and Amelie just these lovely rays of sunshine?

*snorts* Of course. Not.

I wish I could enter the story and hog tie James and Amelie together to force them to kiss and make up. Then give Henrietta a mighty big slap on her heavily made-up, pretentious cheek.

Of course, this hatred is only directed at a certain bimbo You-Know-Who. Definitely not at the fabulous-beyond-words author of the amazing Raining series.

Oh Great One, you are a wicked, brilliant genius for coming up with this awesome story and your writing skills are superb!

Okay, after the liberal amounts of boot-licking (though everything I said was true), can you sign the "I Promise to Give James and Amelie Their Happily Ever After (And Hex Henrietta Into Next Year)" contract?

I am on my knees, crawling in the dust and begging you.

Awesome story. Please update soon and make the plot more fitting to it's title? We readers are getting extremely depressed here.

Luv 'ya!

Author's Response: Yeah, it's only literal, because there's a drought - you get it? I'm going for the ironic pathetic fallacy as opposed to the pretty heavy pathetic fallacy of the prequel. Surely the rain should have been a sign?

It's kinda bizarre responding to reviews left before I rewrote this fic to change up Henrietta's and James' characters. I tweaked a couple of things so that Henrietta doesn't do anything wrong at all, apart from the horrible act of wearing pink (clearly an affront to humanity) and getting in the way of the main couple.


Thank you so so much for your kind words! Will hopefully update soon enough!

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