Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:GirlOnTheSidelines says:
Hello,
You are amazing, can I just put that out there. I absolutly love this story! I think the fact that it is so unique makes it just that extra bit special. The interaction between Percy and Audrey is perfect, especially the way Audrey wants him so badly and he keeps trying to push her away but she just won't give up. And it's so obvious he wants her too... Just give in Percy!
Anyway, back to your writing...Practically flawless as always, I think there were one or two grammatical errors but they don't really matter because this story is just so amazing. I've said that before haven't I?
So yeah. Please update soon and I'm looking forward to A Force of Wills as well :) You're amazing, by the way.

GirlOnTheSidelines x

Author's Response: Hello!

And you're back! I'm so, so happy that you're back! I was wondering where you were, I missed you! :D
*Blush* Complimenting me again I see! I really do like this story too, its actually getting to the point where I know I can do it and I'm not so afraid of what I might write.
Its a bit raunchy on some things which is completely different from some of my other work and that does pose a challenge sometimes.
I honestly haven't read any Percy/Audrey stories before because we don't know anything about her! Just her first name and I thought that that was sort of a shame. But its actually really fun to come up with various backgrounds for her and I settled on something very, very different. Audrey's no sweet little Ministry girl after all. ;)
The attraction between Percy and Audrey is brewing ever closer to its conclusion but how it happens is sort of intense. I think? I might need to write my ideas down instead of just keeping them in my head. :p
Percy gives in eventually but the question is, can Audrey handle it? Hehehehe. ;)
Thanks for pointing out my constant grammar problems! I'll have to go back and edit them eventually but that'll be down the line sometime. How do you like my banner for This is Angelina? And I got one for Albus and am now trying to get one for Audrey! I hope it turns out all right.
Anyway! A Force of Wills is going to be up, hopefully by tomorrow so expect that! :D Its a chapter that I hope you'll really, really like. ;)
Much love and thanks again for being so amazingly awesome!
Gabbie


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 590
Submit Report: