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Review:LoopyLemon says:
This is really really good!! I really enjoyed it. I liked the way it flowed with a dreamlike quality. It was easy to drift from paragraph to paragraph and see the dream unfold through Lily's eyes.

I liked James' musings at the end. They were a nice touch to round off the piece and give it some grounding.

I noticed a spelling mistake "He sore again..." It didn't detract from reading the piece, just thought you might want to know about it.

Also, to get rid of the extra blank space, use the plain text editor when copying your text from word. The extra space wasn't bad in this piece, but once you start adding lots of dialogue it can get vaguely annoying. I had to learn this one the hard way :)

All in all, good piece. I enjoyed reading it :)

Author's Response: Thank you for bringing that spelling/spacing issue to my attention! It really does help. Surprisingly enough, I find spelling/formatting a big role in what I choose to read these days!

I really loved writing this because my style is more dreamlike, but I don't often get a chance to write it, so this was fun for me. I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks again
~Elle

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