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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Thank you so much for reviewing my story, I'm here to return the favour! ;)

Wow, this was amazing. Seriously /such/ a good beginning to a Marauder's and so original too! Not very canon-compliant because James did actually fancy Lily but seriously no-one would care about that because it's so fantastically written! I was laughing so much as well, lol!

"The fiend girl had my mother in her clutches! I must rescue her!" Awww what a little mummy's boy! James was so cute in parts of this.

I really like the way you've set things out too - the occasional one-line paragraphs and things. Usually I'd think this interrupted the flow a little but it didn't here.

Anyway, a very interesting take on Lily and James's relationship! I loved it :)

Author's Response: Hello there!

Intrinsically it is canon because he's just trying to hide the fact that he's head over heels with her :P but that'll become more apparent throughout the story! :P

He was a sweetie :P But I only made him that way because he's telling the story and he wants to be seen as chivalrous and all that :P i don't know if you've noticed (yet) but a lot of it is twisted to suit his point of view :P so just be conscious of that if you're reading the next few chapters! (once they've been posted!)

Thanks a lot for your review! I really love YOUR story! Just telling you again! :P

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