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Review:PhoenixPulse says:
Okay dearie. So when I said I would get back to 'Slytherin Much', I meant it.

Now for your review!

I like this chapter. It was light, and carefree, and sarcastically humorous. It brought a big smile to my face, especially when she had James cornered-- but boy is Scar fully of attitude. The girl's got spunk!

And by what I'm taking by this, is she in her third year already? I just need to ask, because if she is, I sort of would like to have a better understanding of what her first two years of schooling were like. How the Slytherins treated her, or how the other houses treated her. There's a pretty big jump between the first day she became a first year, and now she's in her third year. I'm not complaining of course, I just wish I had a more detailed idea.

As for her relationship with her two friends, it's cute. I like Jeremy, and I also like Scar's little background with him. It's nice to know how they became friends, and I liked the idea of how you befriended them together. Very original.

And James-- he seemed pretty in-character here. I can imagine him being cross, but I don't imagine him being so dramatic over it. I don't know, maybe it's just me. I liked how Scar was able to inflate his ego though. Whoo-hoo! Heck yeah, girl power! (I think?)

Anyway, great chapter lovely!

With love,

Pearl

Author's Response: Yay, you're back!:)

I'm so glad you liked it! And yes, Scarlet does quite have a lot of attitude..;) I love her like that..

Scarlet is currently in her fourth year. I'm sorry, I should have mentioned that before!
Ahh, there's a story to it. Initially I had written a couple of chapters continuing from her first day in Hogwarts but I found myself stuck after after penning down a couple of them. And I didn't want to leave Scarlet and the whole story abandoned so I decided to start anew (leaving the first chapter in place). But yeah, quite a few people have wanted to know what happened earlier and I will be including small little memories in the future chapters :)

I ADORE Jeremy! I'm glad you liked it :) I'm pretty sure you'll love the 3rd chapter then as it has a lot of the Scarlet/Jeremy friendship.

Oh thank you! I'm always so worried of the characters because I want it to as canon as possible.. And James's rash reaction was needed to Scarlet to kinda hate his guts :)
And I think you mean 'deflate' and not 'inflate'? Cuz that would change everything xD

Thanks once again! Please do drop by another time! xD

~NightStar


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