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Review:missclaire17 says:
aw Robbie!
such a bad idea to go with ROSALIND!
lol i approve of maddie yelling at him xD
but lily going with murph seems like a very good idea. lily can show him off hahaha
and make all of the girls jealous of her hot date xD

aw lily D;
wishing she wasn't a squib D;
i can't even begin to FATHOM how horrible it must be for her that she cant be around magic
and that she has to deal with all of this.
having to tell someone about magic, and the worst part is that she's not even magic... D;

for a moment, when i saw the chapter summary, i thought it had something to do with carlotta haha
i think james is concerned with more than just modifying carlotta's memory.
i wish he would recognize that... D;

Author's Response: The main moral of this story? Boys are silly. Haha :) But yes, it's a pretty tough situation for Lily to be in; she's coped well with it so far but every now and again, something crops up to knock her backwards slightly. And it's always going to be like that for her so long as she has to keep it all secret. It's not easy being a Squib!

Yeah, I decided to be cruel with my chapter summary, haha. James is TOTALLY more concerned with more than just modifying Carlotta's memory. As for how long it takes him to twig ... well, keep reading ;) Thanks for reviewing!


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