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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Ahh! My time to read HPFF has been very sporadic and when I come back to this story I find it completed!! Congratulations by the way - and I can't wait to read to the end and find out all of what's in store! That being said, I really, really loved this chapter. I really do repeat myself every time, but you're an absolutely genius writer!

YOUR CHARACTERS ARE ALWAYS SO FLAWLESS. I loved the parallel situation with Salazar/Vincent and Dumbledore/Colin and the completely different things they were saying. It feels like there's a lot of plotting and planning from the individual contestants, and it'll be really interesting to see how they will all fare in the next round, especially when they have to actually face each other.

Tonks preparing her fighting skills was also a fantastic scene. OH I LOVE MOODY! - "Flagrate?" Moody barked. "Are you an Auror or a unicorn, because I really canít tell the difference!" I'm glad that Tonks is trying to stay true to who she is - it makes her seem so different to Lily Potter (even though they are so similar in so many ways). Loved this chapter! Can't wait for round 2! :)

Author's Response: Hello again!!

Thank you. :) It's such an awesome feeling to finish a WIP. Switching it to 'completed' makes me feel like I've accomplished something.

Dumbledore's methods are very different from Salazar's, as you've noticed. I do feel a tad sorry for Vincent that he has such a slimy guidance counselor.

Moody! I neglected him a lot in this story, so I tried to squeeze him in wherever possible just to show how he's getting along. Still being bossy, still being paranoid. XD Tonks's determination not to lose herself is exactly what separates her from Lily, who thinks she has to be ruthless to get by.

So glad you loved this chapter! I hope you like the next one (which is round 2!) Thank you for reading and reviewing. :)


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