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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Ahh this was a fantastic and so well written chapter! It really felt like the story was moving along, from Part I to this part (I'm not explaining it very well, but the transition was excellent). It was great to see a glimpse of the writing production/publishing process and to know that we're getting closer to discovering all of Krum's secrets!

I liked how you explained what had happened to Krum in his trial and everything, and it was interesting that the news came via Joseph Heart and the newspaper. A small part of me is kind of surprised that Brooks didn't contact Rose at all about it, considering how he was a rather important driving force behind the book and wanting Rose involved?

The quidditch info and some of Krum's history was great! It's already starting to give me a better idea of Krum. Interesting to see where he lives too.. well I really, really enjoyed this chapter! Looking forward to the questioning and I'm definitely intrigued by how the romance will come into play! :)
- Charlotte

Author's Response: Thank you again for another lovely review. I'm so glad you thought the transition worked well. I felt that some time needed to pass between their first meeting and what happens in the next chapter, but I worried about all the narrative and backstory reading too bland. Hopefully it worked all right in the end.

As to why Brooks didn't contact Rose directly, I hope that becomes more clear in future chapters too...about how he really fits into all of this.

I'm so happy you liked the chapter. If you get a chance to read more, I'd be interested what you think of Rose and Krum after they finally "get together." Thank you again for continuing to read and review. I really appreciate it so very much.


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