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Review:SereneChaos says:
Hey! Your writing is very fresh and easy to read, and I especially enjoyed Sirius' voice in this! I like Mia as a character, and think that you did a great job mixing your proportions of drama with her dead parents and playfulness with her friends.

In terms of the song lyrics--I would try to avoid adding them in unless they actually relate to the story. What you're probably reading are song-fics, which are stories themed around a certain song. Also, for your story summary, I would refrain from saying your summary isn't good. As a general rule of thumb, don't post anything you feel isn't actually good, plus you want to give your readers a chance to come to their own conclusions. :P

Otherwise, you have a great start! Good luck with the rest of your story!!!

Author's Response: Thankyou!!! I love you so much right now, reviews are awesome :D thanks for the tips on lyrics and my summary, I have looked at my summary and changed it. I didn't know what song-fics were, but I'm not going to add lyrics anymore, seeing as this isn't one..

Please keep reviewing, everything helps!!

xoxo Sqig

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