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Review:caoty says:
Oh, teenage angst, my favouritest thing in the world.
(I'm seventeen.)

So this was... great, actually. I liked the list-like structure, because you've used it to cut between scenes very clearly, and it's worked especially well with numbers 7-10. I LOL'd IRL.

I'm also very impressed with your transitions between humour and angst and back again. You've managed to do that without making it feel disjointed - hell, you've even managed to make a disjointed structure without it feeling disjointed - so kudos to you because I, personally, could not do that.

You've also used the Perks quote and the ideas behind it really effectively, and I wish you good luck with the challenge.

Just a tiny nit-pick: couple of typos/'whom' abuse, IIRC how to use 'whom'. Nothing a good proofread won't fix. :)

I'm glad I've read this now; thank you for posting it in response to that status, and sorry for stealing your spot.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm eighteen so I know how you feel about the angst haha.

I'm really glad that you enjoyed this and that you were kind enough to review this! I don't mind that you "tool my spot"; I don't know why but my internet connection is very slow on the forums so I didn't see that you had already commented when I did. But the gesture is incredibly sweet and I appreciate it :D

I'm glad that you enjoyed the oneshot's structure, my usage of the quote, and its mix of humor and angst. That makes me very happy!!!

Thank you for pointing that there's still some typos throughout; I'll have to look it over at some point.

Thank you again so much!!!

~Jess :D


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