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Review:Navin says:
Enjoying the story so far, I feel like I'm getting a feel for the characters more now, particularly Chris and Liz.

I feel like the writing has improved on this most recent chapter, so hopefully this keeps up!

In terms of constructive pointers, I would encourage the use of some metaphors/analogies to help the reader get a sense of unfamiliar settings and objects. I know this is a big ask if you're not used to using them in your writing but it's something to keep in mind perhaps.

Keep up the good work!

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