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Review:Olivia says:
This is pure genius.
What is it with Harry Potter fans? Every story on this site is so unique... With One Direction fanfictions, everything is about some gorgeous smart girl who falls in love.
Superhero fanfics always have a normal guy/girl who becomes a super, meets the person of their dreams and then saves said love interest when he/she is kidnapped by an evil villain.
But Harry Potter? Anything can happen, including the Birds and Bees talk.
Sex is always something that confused me about Hogwarts; eleven year olds can't know these...things... so wouldn't heaps of them get pregnant in their seventh year or something?
Also, the students don't study math, english, studies of society and environment or any of the essential aspects of learning- so shouldn't they be reeeally oblivious to the world?
Anyways, this is brilliant :D

Author's Response: I wonder about the lack of math, too. I mean there must be wizard accountants, right? They have to learn it somehow. Maybe there's a calculate spell to solve that stuff. Who knows.

I'm so pleased to hear you enjoyed this story! I really had fun writing it. Poor Arthur, he get so overwhelmed by all those boys! XD

Isn't One Direction a band? (sorry, I'm over 30, I don't always know these things) I didn't realize people wrote fanfics about bands. I don't really get how that works. Now I feel old. lol. :p But I totally hear you on HP fanfics. They have so much possibility for theme, plot, character. It's good stuff. Fun for the writer.

I assume the sex ed is happening at home, for Hogwarts students. Otherwise they probably would have a rash of teenage pregnancies.

Thank you for the review!


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