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Review:No_oneKnows says:
"His name is Sirius."

"His name is Satan."

I LOVED THAT HAHA! That made me giggle :P

the transition between the Sirius perspective, to the detention scene and then back into Janes perspective was done really well because it really flowed and melded in together.

Just maybe instead of a long gap between the the common room and Hogsmeade, you could use something like ~ or a - just to signify it a bit more obviously. The big gap disrupted my reading flow, but I'm not sure if that's the same case for everyone :)

Despite that, I really like this story so far! :D :D

Author's Response: Haha, yeah I quite like that line too :)

I've been trying to fix my formatting for the longest time. Whenever I paste my chapter on to the website, it messes up and all these gaps appear. I'll try to fix that up somehow, because I know exactly what you mean.


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