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Review:EverDiggory says:
Hey Amanda!

I swear I've read this before, but I forgot to review I suppose.

I love Lucius and Narcissa, so this was quite the cup of tea for me! I love how Narcissa really tried to keep her composure in tact, just as I imagine she would. Lucius was so cute and adorable and fangirl worthy, yet kept his composure and dignity as well! I loved it! This was very cute. My heart was breaking because Andromeda left her whole family and you captured it really well. Obviously I realized Andromeda left her family but theres something about the way you wrote this really renewed the sorrow I felt for them:/ I loved your imagery, by the way!

Amazing job!



Author's Response: Hah, I know you do, so thanks for coming by :) I'm glad you liked both Lucius and Narcissa and felt that they were in character here. I really had fun messing with their stuffiness :) I'm also glad that the weight of Andromeda's departure came through in Narcissa's grief, and that you liked the imagery. My head canon is that Narcissa secretly missed her traitor sister very much, and that they made up after the second war.

Thanks for another lovely review :)


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