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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

So, I got your advice from the forums not too long ago and thought, "Of course I'm going to read more of LEBS!" and so as always, I'm glad to be here!
For a moment, I was a bit concerned that Greg was cracking under the pressure but it was good advice that Ossie gave him I think. He really can't do everything on his own, which is excellently displayed in the last few scenes. Its been a while, obviously, that the Houses have helped each other with anything and I can tell that everyone has something they need to know. Its a scary situation of course and all the various dynamics with the boys is really amazing to read, I can't even begin to ask how you developed them so well! D': Jealous!
The fact that they want to destroy the Wild Hunt is pretty brave of course and I wish them all the best but I know that it's not going to be easy. What with ritual human sacrifices and all that ruining the party...
I'll be back soon to see what happens and I really like that ending to this chapter! Amazing as always. :D
p.s.: I have to decide whether to delete one of my stories but I'll most likely be back to the Misfits reasonably soon. So, uhm, be on the look out for those pink panties! ;)
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Simple answer: "write what you know". When you've seen / watched / helped group and team dynamics evolve every year for the last decade you get rather used to the subtle clues that fit within it.

Why do you need to delete one of your stories? Getting distracted with two many plots?!


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