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Review:Debra20 says:
Hellooo there! Thank you for joining my challenge. I feel honored to read your entry.

I'm happy you chose to explore Lily's feelings/thoughts about Snape, I was worried no one would and she was one of the characters I was dying to read about. I simply loved the emotional tone of this one shot. It was bitter sweet reading about their last interaction after so much time had passed. After so many things that happened. I'm happy that Lily pushed forward in trying to make Snape forgive himself. I really do think he deserved some peace. If not in life, then surely he deserved it in death.

I appreciate that she didn't lie to him during his final moments with her, that she was straightforward about her true feelings for him. I think that pushed him, for the first time in his life, to actually accept that she considered him to be just a very good friend, nothing more. And I think that Snape needed full acceptance of that fact. You can't move on always ignoring or pushing to the back of your mind real facts. I have the impression that deep down, he always knew that Lily would have never loved him back with the same kind of love he had for her. His only problem, that I think is the root to all of his continuous turmoil during life is that he never accepted that. I'm glad that he found the strength to do that in the afterlife.

You wrote a very sweet one shot dear. As a minor suggestion, I think you should go over it a few times and edit it here and there. There are a few letters missing from some words, some misspells. Nothing serious enough to disrupt the flow of the story but I think fixing them would improve your story greatly.

Thank you again for participating!

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