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Review:Calypso says:
Wow new chapter already! It's really lovely to have some longer chapters too- I get to enjoy this story for longer!

Yay! She told Penny! Their scene together was very sweet, and touchingly awkward. They both sounded very genuine. I can't wait to see how their Hogsmeade trip goes!
I'm also hoping to find out a bit more about Penny and to see her character developed some more. She seems like a fairly confident character so far, but I'm really interested to know more about her!
Glad Oliver's got somebody to hook up with too :P

I'm loving the conversation about the offerings to the Founders- "I hear the aroma of burnt detention slips is particularly pleasing to Gryffindor" was fantastic! I always love Amelia and Oliver's conversations- they're always fun to read!

Author's Response: I'm glad I pulled off that scene, they're quite difficult to get right and all too easy to get wrong :P Hogsmeade will be in the next chapter, along with more of Penny's character - I'm looking forward to going into more depth with that. Oliver needed to have someone - he and Amelia have such a strong bro code going on that neither would go to Hogsmeade with someone else unless the other had someone to go with as well. I love that friendship more and more with each chapter I write.
That was a fun conversation to write. I should do that more often :P
Thanks for the review, and I hope to see you back for the next chapter!


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