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Review:IloveNeville says:
Wow, Maia sure is a piece of work, isn't she?
I really liked this first chapter. It's written very eloquently and I love the way you've characterized everyone. I loved Moody! And James interests me. This is obviously after he has snagged Lily, so that explains why he's so much calmer than Sirius. He seems to have grown up a bit since Hogwarts. I'm also looking forward to reading more about Maia and maybe figuring out why she's the way that she is.

Now on to chapter 2!

Author's Response: She really is :P

Moody was really fun for me to write because he's just so snappish but there's this underlying humour to him (in my opinion) & that's always fun :P Yeah, James definitely has matured quite a lot since his days at Hogwarts, and Lily had a great deal to do with that!

Thanks for reviewing!! :D


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