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javct45 here with your requested review.

Yay for Gellert! He is such an underrated character in the hp series and I adore reading about him. I always fan-girl a little when Gellert is shown with a heart for someone else (be it Ariana or Albus).

Worried about the characters you say? It's hard to comment about the real-characterisation on Gellert because we so little of him in the books, and when we do hear about him it is usually a passing comment from someone else, but I think that you have managed to capture him really well. I just love the line: "His equal in everything, his opposite number, the only one who ever challenged him, the only one with the power or ability to defeat him." I think that captures Gellert's personality so well because him and Albus used to be friends, best friends in fact and I think that a lot people forget that and write them as enemies. I'm glad that you didn't, even after Nurmengard.

As someone who has looked closely into Gellert's timeline can I just compliment you on your canon information in this story, down to the last detail. Even leaving Britain to last BECAUSE of Albus being there.

I defiantly want to read on and to know what happens next (or previously, depending on whether you write their summer together or not). Don't be worried about the description, I really liked it. It doesn't have "Lord Of The Ring" imagery/description that just goes on and on and on and on which, when you first said you used a lot of imagery, I thought. You used just the write amount and you wrote it beautifully, I can't pick which line was the best because there were too many too choose from.

Gellert has a phoenix? A slight-cameo you say, is this, perhaps, the same phoenix that Dumbledore has in his office in CoS? *here's to hoping*

Please let me know when the next chapter is up; I can see myself becoming very invested in this story!

Jasmine, x

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