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javct45 here with your requested review!

Yay for snily! Honestly give me a good Snily and I'm sold. This story is defiantly dreamy but in a good way. I've always thought that in the last few moments of Severus' life he was always bound to be dreamy. I also like how you referenced Lily to the different seasons of the year.

It made sense to some extent, I mean, I could see that Severus was reflecting over his love for Lily but maybe you could add some flashbacks or reflections of moments when she was summer, spring, autumn and winter. It's just a suggestion but it might just give some insight into Severus' unrequited feelings for Lily.

I love the way you wrote this though; you managed to capture Lily's feeling towards Severus and Severus feelings towards Lily brilliantly.

Good job!
Jasmine, x

Author's Response: hello!

Thank you for this! haha yay for snily, though im so new to it!

I might add some flashbacks of a sort alright, especially for winter, you're right. Thanks so much for the advice and praise :)

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