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Review:Calypso says:
Haha well I said the last chapter was a little bridge-y. This one more than made up for it!

Your writing is so easy to read- it just seems to flow off the page. It's hardly ever sounds forced or unnatural, and your characters are wonderful. The canon characters seem so in character and your OCs are really well thought out. Amelia, especially seems a very real teenage girl. She's very easy to identify with because she has strengths and flaws, and anxieties and failings, just like anybody else.
It was nice to hear about her background- interesting how the Dementors affect her. She seems very assured on the outside, but on the inside she seems far from secure.
It certainly seems as if she's in for a tough seventh year one way or another.

Woo for Oliver! He does seem like a good friend. And I hope she gets together with Penny! I had wondered if she might develop an interest in her... Still, I imagine they're going to have some stuff to go through, even if they do get together. I can't wait to see how that aspect will unfold!

Thankyou for a great evening reading this story! Please update it soon! I'm looking forward to reading more! :)

-Bethany

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Amelia is a very flawed character, and she does have very real fears and anxieties that stem, primarily, from her family background. It is something that will be further explored in other chapters, and I think it's important to have that depth.
Oliver is great. I love him. And I won't give anything away re. Penny and Amelia, but there will definitely be more in later chapters.
You're very welcome, and thank you so much for reading and the reviews! I hope to see you back for Chapter 7, which should be up very shortly (I'm talking a matter of hours, I'm a TA and impatient :P)


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