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Review:Calypso says:
Oh gosh! Dramatic chapter ending much! I did not see that coming!

It's going to be interesting to see what Amelia makes of this. Certainly at the moment her reaction doesn't seem entirely positive...

I'm looking forward to seeing how Penny's sexuality and its repercussions work in the plot- it's a theme not much explored in the books or in fanfiction so kudos to you for tackling it.

This chapter seemed much darker than the earlier ones, a lot more serious. I loved Amelia's reflections on Slytherin House. It's so great seeing a different perspective on them. (I find myself so much more sympathetic to them since being sorted in Slytherin on Pottermore!) Anyway, it was a great insight into how that House might work. Also loved her reflections on Umbridge- I reckon those two could be powerful enemies!

And I gotta say- you come up with awesome character names!

Really interesting developments in this chapter! I'm off to read on :)

Author's Response: Haha I suppose it is a bit of a cliffhanger, especially with Amelia's reaction. I wondered how people would interpret that.
It is a theme that I don't see a lot of in the books or in fic, and I want to do it justice. Fingers crossed I pull it off.
It is a bit darker, and I really enjoyed exploring Slytherin a bit further, for the exact same reason as you actually :P While I'd still call myself more of a Ravenclaw than a Slytherin, it makes thinking about the inner workings of that house a lot easier.
I really don't come up with awesome character names, Ancient Greece and Rome do :P Tiberius and Gaius are Roman names, Penthesilea is an Amazon queen who fought in the Trojan War and Iphigenia was a daughter of Agamemnon sacrificed before said Trojan War. I'm a Classics major. I can't resist.
Once again, thanks so much for reading and reviewing!


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