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Review:Calypso says:
It was nice to find out some more about your characters!

Oliver seems like a nice guy. I quite enjoyed the friendly but competitive relationship he has with Amelia and I like that their skills lie in different areas. It was a good idea that the Ravenclaws are better at theory-based subjects and other houses at more practical ones- makes a lot of sense.

It was nice too to learn a bit about their backgrounds- and their catastrophic dating histories :P Amelia's dad seems a bit rubbish but it's nice finding out about her family.

Great chapter- I can't wait to see how these characters develop. You've set them up really well :)

Author's Response: I do love Oliver and Amelia's friendship and it's always fun writing their interactions. I think they illustrate the differences between the houses quite well - Oliver is a bit of an academic snob, as I can imagine Ravenclaws being, and Amelia much prefers the practical, applied magic subjects, but they're both equally intelligent.
Amelia's dad is rubbish. You'll see a bit more of him in later chapters.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and character development is my favourite thing to write so thank you for those comments and for the review :) See you next chapter!


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