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Review:Chana says:
Wow.this is great! Very dark, but great. I like darker stories sometimes good ones that stay in canon and are nicely written are sometimes difficult to find in the fanfiction world, but I think you are really nailing it. I personally love how you are writing Bellatrix's character its obvious how much care you are putting into selecting her words and actions. She is so controlling and sadistic - such a messed up personality that must be hard to write.but you are doing great! I feel bad for Hermione :/ But its great to see a Hermione and Bellatrix torture scene written in such a dynamic way that stays in canon and true to the characters.

Keep it up! I can't wait to see another chapter :)

Author's Response: Hey, thank you so much for dropping by to review this for me -- random reviews like this always totally make my day! I'm so happy you enjoyed this story. I'm really very proud of it, and hearing such positive things about it from its readers is so, so reassuring.

Bellatrix's character is perhaps one of the most difficult to tackle, solely because she has such a large canon voice and presence in the original series. I'm so happy you think I'm writing her well here! The torture scene, too, was a bit of a tight squeeze, just because I didn't want to copy the Bellatrix/Hermione torture scene we already saw. Your comments really have made my day. ♥

I'm so glad to see you stop by! The next chapter should be up here pretty soon -- by this coming Monday or Tuesday, I'm thinking! I'd love for you to drop by again. :) Thank you so much!!


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