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Review:luna_lovely says:
gah! how can there only be five chapters in this story? i need to read more and i need to read now! I love the story and i love the characters but i kind of feel that you have introduced too many people with not enough background information which means as a reader i only know them by their names and not their character. still its early days, plenty of time for character development in future chapters. keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm writing the sixth at the moment. Yes, I was thinking exactly that and was planning on putting the other players (Peter, Mary etc) in the spotlight a bit. I'm glad my suspicious was confirmed, thank you for that! :] The next chapter should be up and validated by Monday or so, but hopefully I can finish it earlier.

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