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Review:CassiePotter says:
Hello! And we're back to Miss Audrey! I really love her character, and how down to earth she is! She's not a ditzy, silly kind of girl, and I love that we can forget about the fact that she's a stripper, just because her personality is so awesome. She's a normal girl who just happens to have to do that to make a living. And, of course, with Percy thrown in the mix, things definitely get interesting! But I want her to find out that he's a wizard! I can't wait to see how she'll take the news... Haha. I think it's nice that they're coming back to each other, and that she really has some feelings for him (even if she doesn't really know it yet). It makes their relationship more meaningful, especially because we know they end up together! This was an amazing chapter and I can't wait for A Force of Wills! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hello!

Hey, welcome back! For some reason, Audrey is actually a really easy character to write for right now, I think I'm really getting used to her. She's a pretty smart, worldly girl and I agree, she's just stripping to make a living and at some parts I can tell she's pretty sensitive and vulnerable. Its probably why she's so attracted to Percy, who might be alot like her and doesn't know it yet. ;)
Oh, she'll find out he's a wizard pretty soon actually, I just have to flesh out the idea first before typing it. I think by chapter five maybe? This might be a bit longer than "This is Angelina" but its going to be a short story. So bear with me!
There's something about writing these two and putting them together against their better judgment that just makes me fuzzy all over. The attraction is strong and their interactions are funny to write for me! :D
Not sure how things will go for them in the future but I'll have them working it out! :D You have been warned beforehand that you're going to be drowning in angst.
Thanks so much for coming back after so long and I have a one-shot coming with Georgie so after that you'll get your fill of A Force of Wills.
Just wait until you see what I've done.hehehehe. >:D
Much love,

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