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Review:Courtney says:
I liked Taylor a lot more in this chapter. I'm glad she actually gave Rose a chance, as before she seemed so selfish and stuckup and I'm glad she is being a good friend to Scorpius and even James. And I'm glad the girls all got along. I do have to admit I think that Taylor's group is a little annoying and over the top about how amazing and clever they are and how they never get caught- it seems too overdone and pretty unbelievable that a group of kids are so much smarter and more talented than everyone else. I like them a lot better now that they seem more mature than in the flashbacks and I'm interested to see how things continue.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked Taylor more, she has her good moments and her not so good moments but don't we all? She's definitely good at coming off as stuck-up but it's more that she's closed off than anything else. She has a lot of trust issues where she doesn't like to get close to people without proof that they won't screw her over which definitely causes problems. But in the end she's a Gryffindor so she had to come through for her friends.

Remember that this story is all from Taylor's point of view and she likes to remember things in a good light--ignoring all the times they got caught. She does have a record so that right there should tell you they weren't as good as she likes to believe. How they got through school whilst missing so much class will be re-addressed (I think some of it is in the prologue but I'm not really sure) so hopefully that will clear up the 'clever' part a bit. I'm glad they seem more mature because I did want it to be obvious how much they've changed. They definitely still have their own issues, something Taylor is particularly good at overlooking, but I will make sure that I continue to make them more grounded and add in some of the not-so-happy-ending events that happend in the next few chapters.

Thanks so much for the review! I'll update as soon as I get a chance to finish the next chapter!


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