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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
As I suspected, Greg is in Slytherin! It seemed like it was heading in that direction all along, but you threw in just enough of a misdirection with the Hufflepuff stuff, but it kind of felt similar to Harry's sorting in the books.

It's interesting to see how the boy's seem to be ashamed of Slytherin's repuation, while the Slytherins in the books seemed to revel in it. But that's probably realistic given the events that occured and the light that would cast Slytherin in.

The sorting scene was really well done, and it seemed to capture the dynamics of the hat and ceremony well. Greg's sorting showed a lot about his character and the challenges he will likely face. Theo adds a new dimension to the story as well, and it will be interesting to watch the new friendships develop.

Author's Response: What gave it away?!

The world of these muggle-born Slytherins is completely removed from the world of JKR's books. The last of the pupils (not) present at the final battle, and "taught" by the Carrows, have graduated, and there's a void to fill.

Thanks again for the reviews!


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