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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
So it's been quite a while since I read the first couple chapters, but luckily I was able to get up to speed pretty quickly and remember where I left off.

It was very interesting to see the dynamics of how the houses would interact in the post war years, and how far Slytherin has fallen. It was very easy to believe, since the snakes didn't exactly aquit themselves well in the final battle, and I would imagine public opinion would have turned very much against slytherins and purebloods in general after voldy's defeat.

Since it's the era between Hogwarts and Next Gen, you pretty much have to make up all your own characters, which you have done a good job of so far. The way the boys interact with each other and thir banter was a very believable depiction of how boys around that age would act (since I'd like to think it wasn't that long ago that I was one of them haha) And I absolutely loved th football references, very well played.

Overall I think the story is moving at a pretty good pace and it will be interesting to see which house he ends up in, although I think I might have a guess:)

Author's Response: Thanks very much - pleased to read that the momentum is easily retained and the setting feels realistic.

I spend too long on football terraces to give it up that easily... tables have turned a little for Exeter and Plymouth since this was written, though!


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