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Review:BKL8008 says:
Clause 73 – also known as “Keep Your Bloody Monster in the Loch” ! Probably the best line I've read yet. This explains a lot! Well worth the wait, and glad to see that the boys have overcome their differences. Louis only rated page 9, though? And Rose ignored in class? That won't go down well, either, I think. And now for the mystery - who let the Muggles in? Will they do it again? What if they babble on about Hogwarts?! Ouch...
One other thing, I like your ability to come up with whimsical names. I seem to have no talent for that. Well done, and great capture of "boys" as always.

Author's Response: I think Pages 1-8 were mainly an in-depth interrogation of the Ministry of Magic's handling of the Statute of Secrecy, and speculation over the identity of the intruder(s)... On any other day, I think Louis would have made at least page 5! As for the mystery, well, now you see why we spent so long in that first History of Magic lesson.

Some of the names are courtesy of scouring through the HP Wiki - others are a result of opening up Google Maps, hovering over the British countryside, and settling on a place name that can make the transition into a surname.

Chapter 13 will be hitting the queue tonight. It's amazing how much I can actually get done once the cricket season finishes...


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