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Review:hp481516 says:
This is definitely one of my favorite chapters! First of all, I am rather jealous of Annie because I want a boy to rent out a chocolate shop for me! But then again, Annie is dating someone who got another girl pregnant, so maybe I'm not so jealous. Also, the scene between Fred and George was one of the best so far. Fred crying was written very well. I am glad that Fred was finally able to let it all out. I think I have mentioned this in previous reviews, but the way you put in little details that help readers to understand the characters are fantastic and really stood out in this chapter! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! This chapter was heart-breaking to write because Fred bases so much of his life on his father's opinion, whether he knows it or not. And George bases so much of his life on Fred. It's a complicated father-son dynamic, but they are two peas in a joke shop.

Thanks so much for the review!

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